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[Wind-Tanken face]

Hmm...

As they said in the reviews below me, it's too abstract. You can barely make out much.

The colour scheme in this is nice to look at, and I can't complain there. The sky-like colours at the very top look very good, and the other bright colours looked fine together. Also, it looks cool as an oil painting.

As for the picture itself, I wouldn't really see it as a face. I can't seem to find the nose (unless it's the purple thing at the very left or the yellow thing, -.-) and I don't see what you mean by slowly disappearing from up to down. It sounds like an original idea, but I can't really see it in this picture.

In all, the colours are great, but the message of the picture isn't given out much, since I can't really see anything which has to do with a face (that could be my fault though). Using the same colours, if you remake it to look a little more obvious, I'm sure it'll come out better.
7/10

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

I know. Thanks!

[aging up]

A work of 10 minutes

This really isn't done very well. It looks like you did this in 10 minutes or less.

It looks too rough and needs more work in it. Shading in this isn't that special, and they all look pretty strange. The first one looks too much like a used, 2 coloured rubber, and I agree with FlashtooREV, when saying that the last one looks like a squid. He doesn't have any wrinkles either. The face shapes all look quite strange. You should've taken a shape which looks like a head, and used that shape for the drawings, as Fro said.

Still, it is quite a good idea, which I haven't seen yet in the Art Portal. A good start, but too rough and needs work.
3/10

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piggy123 responds:

i wanted the heads to look like that

[Shark]

Wow!

This is a really good picture! Needs some detail, but definitely realistic.

The shark looked very realistic. I just think the face looked kinda strange, and it was a little too small in all. You should make it a little longer. Plus, the gills look too big and stand out too much. Apart from those, it looks almost like an actual picture of a shark.

The colour scheme is godly. Perfect colours for th sharks, and the sea in the background, although by blurring the colours together a little more, it may look better. Also, the sand, although it does have a good colour, is too blurred in with the sea.

It was a good idea to do a shoal of fish in the background, but as they said in the other reviews, it needs more. Some things which take the attention away from the shark a little, like a casket, a distant silhouette of another shark, more fish, seaweed, rocks, a cave, starfish, and maybe something artificially made, like a submarine. Just don't make them stand out too much, or the shark loses its importance and you'll have to rename it 'Under the Sea' or something.

In conclusion, a very realistic picture, which just needs some more detail and working on the shark a little. The colour scheme is great, and overall the picture looks excellent. Keep it up!
9/10

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SeaBoundRhino responds:

Thanks :D

I like what you say about the colour scheme. I see that the main problem to my drawings is just adding small details. I knew I should have added more to the background, but anything on the sea bed looked bad. But I think that is because of what you said about the sand being blurred too much.

Very good review.

[Black gold sculptue]

Yep, much better in full size!

It looks quite cool, and detailed. I like it.

The texture in the black sculpture was amazing, and the picture was quite cleverly drawn. I looks like loads of things but I couldn't make up my twisted mind to what I really think it is.

The background, in my opinion, didn't impress me much. The orange didn't look that well with the black and didn't look that realistic. Try and make it look more real by adding chips of the stone, and cracks, and change the colour to something that looks better with black. I don't know if this'll come out good, I don't know how to review art.

Also, as the other reviews pointed out, it doesn't look that good when it's not centered. It's too much to the left.

Anyway, sorry for the useless review. Good job on it in all :).
9/10
5/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thanks for this. It was a good review indeed!

[Velvet Sculpture]

Whoa...

This looks just like someone took a picture of a sculpture. It's that amazing!

The shading and designs were perfect, and looked exactly like a proper sculpture. I especially liked the designs around the middle.

As for the colour, the one you chose was very good, but some more colours would fit if you're aiming for a mystical and magical type, for example, a faint red light coming out of the crevice that makes the circle.

Still, It's really amazing. I feel as if I could reach out and touch it on my computer monitor and feel the texture of the rock, lol. Keep up the great work!!!
10/10
5/5

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HeavyTank responds:

Aah, thanks a lot!

[The never-ending secret]

Hm...

Another 7 :3. Anyway, onto the art...

I'll start with the grass. Needs some more resolution, but looks pretty cool. I noticed a few parts in the grass copied and pasted, which ruins it a little...

The background was pretty cool, but needs more glowing lights to it, especially at the sides, and maybe some sort of shape which the one who's looking at your art might be able to make out, because it looks a little random.

Doesn't look too bad, but just like your other submissions, needs some more detail. Still, keep up the good work ;).
7/10
4/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thank you for this. I understand your way of thinking:D

[Space Core]

Good job, but needs more detail

With one quick glance, this looks quite cool, but there are some details that need a little fixing.

Firstly, the blue glowing things in the background are all roughly the same size (as Fro said) and there are way too many. Also, there are too little stars, apart from at the top left corner where they all look pushed together.

The planet, which is obviously the main attraction to this picture, looks quite good and the colour scheme is great. I think there should be a bit of a rocky texture on the red to make it less plain, and some craters without blue filled inside them, and maybe a small ring around the planet to make it look a little more like one.

The space background needs a little more detail in it, in my opinion, like distant galaxies, shooting stars, as I said before, more stars, maybe a blackhole in the distance, etc.

Still, in general it's a cool looking pictue, just a little more detail is needed, but good job on it :).
7/10
4/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thanx for that. Greatly appreciated:D

[Joyful Chaos]

Not bad :D

The first thing that got me was how you matched it with the name. A perfect match, the best name I've ever heard and fits with the picture a lot.

I agree with Haggard. The green is a little too bright. You could still achieve the 'joyful' fact without such bright colours. That's mainly what put my score down. Another thing is that a lot of the green is too simple, without much texture in it.

I liked the parts where you blended the red with the black. They made the picture much more chaotic (in a good way...) and I wish there was a little more of the black and red around the picture.

Pretty cool overall. Some problems, but OK ;). Again, good job on that name XD.
7/10
4/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thank you for this :D

[The Eye]

Wow!

I preferred the other two that I reviewed from you, but this one's awesome too.

In my opinion, there are too many colours in this, plus the black and white patches at the bottom and top-left to clash with the bright colours of the rest of the picture.

I like the way the colours bleded in with each other though, and such massive detail makes me not get tired looking at it.

Overall good job. Not your best in my opinion, but definitey looks cool :D. Wow, I don't know how to review art :'(.
9/10
5/5

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HeavyTank responds:

Thank you