You haven't been making music for very long, have you? :P You have some good ideas here though, and I'm hearing a very clear improvement from your earlier tracks (which I also listened to), which is great to hear. It all comes with experience!
Regarding the track, you need to start by getting better sounds. Some of your sounds are pretty alright, but even the ones which sound good are cheesy (like the piano). The drums are quite nice, but sound quite unprocessed/raw, not to mention that their beat is very plain. Everything is quite plain and you need to work on adding intricacy to your tracks, such that it's not clear to hear everything during the first listen. This adds replay value and makes me want to listen to the track more than once.
Your composition is basically just the same progression repeated throughout the whole track. Everything harmonises but only because everything is playing essentially the same or very similar things. Your melodies need to be more about expressing a tune and less about playing arpeggios or repeated phrases in accordance to the chord progression you established at the beginning.
I need to hand it to you though, you have a solid intro! In fact, all of your transitions, while highly simplistic and nothing special, are smooth. 1:53's transition, while not great in terms of a wow-factor, is a good idea that I'd imagine you'd execute much better with some more production experience.
That's all I can really say about this track. I'm honoured you think I make good reviews and I hope that this helps. You've got a way to go in music but there is certainly potential and I look forward to when you start making amazing tracks. In the meantime, keep improving based on other people's criticism and you'll get far. Good luck!
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