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[ParagonX9 - HyperioxX]

Whoa...

Extremely fast paced, and you did an amazing job with the percussion. The melody varied a lot, and the effects were great; they fitted in perfectly. The buildups of the song were really professional and great. Only one problem. The part at 1:35 didn't fit in that well. The sudden rythm changes, in your songs usually come out really impressively, but this time I don't think it came out that well. It didn't fit in at all with the fast paced feel of the song and didn't sound that well overall. Was that supposed to sound like a piano? Well, if so, it doesn't eally sound like one. I'd suggest firstly improving the quality of it, and then choose from moving it to the end or making it match with the rythm of the song. Anyway, the rest of the song was great. I especially liked the solos like the one in 0:33. Well, apart from the problem at 1:35, it was completely perfect, and I couldn't help but give it a
10/10
5/5
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[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix)]

Amazing

One of my favourites from the whole audio portal. Still, some parts of it went a bit off subject if you ask me. The first part sounded amazing, and matched with the name completely, but then, from 0:28 onwards, until the piano solo at 1:36, sounded more on the action side. The first part could've been repeated at the end again, instead of the usual melody. The sound effects were slightly strange as well, but all in all, the rythm and melody of the song was outstanding. The more I heard it, the more I liked it. I especially liked the piano parts, and the bass and percussion was great, but I'd suggest improving it a bit. Still, all in all, a great song, you must've put a lot of work in it, especially since it's so long. Every second of it didn't go off rythm, and it was all completely extraordinary. Keep up the great work, and good luck on your upcoming songs. :)
9/10
5/5
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[Investispacion]

Not that bad, for your first song.

A little boring, and the percussion was a little repetitive, but you varied quite well in the effects, when remembering that this is an ambient loop. The main melody was a little annoying. If you wanted, you could've kept the same rythm in each note, but change the note in each. Another instrument might help.
P.S.: Sorry for giving you that harsh review for your submission 'Simple Silence'. I didn't know it was one of your first. I thought you were one of those idiots who just jot in some junk in their music notation software when they know they can do better and just overpopulate the audio portal. Ahh well, whatever, good luck on your next songs.
710
4/5

Mushrambo606 responds:

Tyvm, The reason why I post my 'newb' work is because I can get feedback on what to do, as you just did! thats wonderfull it can only help.
As months go by I hope to see an improvement in my own work.
Ty for this feedback ;)

[Lalolalo]

Not great,,,

It's a catchy melody, but does the same thing for the whole song, maybe by changing the notes slightly, but the tempo and main melody remained there. It's OK for soundtrack, and the percussion was great. Good job in building it up, but you should try varying it a little more. Also the name wasn't too great lol, but in general, quite a good loop.
7/10
4/5

[The Terminator (RMX)]

First ever made?

If this was your first song, can't wait to hear your upcoming ones. The drums need a little fixing in it, and it went a little off rythm throughout the song. The solo at 2:11 could've been a bit better. Add some piano bass notes, still keeping the same melody, but anyway, great job on it nevertheless. Keep up the good work ;)
8/10
5/5

Christiooa responds:

Thanx man^^

[-Sewer Jam-]

Good song!

The name really matches with the song; good job. The piano was great, but I think you left it a little empty. OK, it's not that sewers aren't supposed to be empty, but I think that piano only was a little boring. Maybe you should've added a double bass or a cello to harmonize it with the piano. Also, a constant booming drum beat in the background would've added the hollow feeling that a sewer would have. Great job with the water sound FX, they added the 'Sewer' in 'Sewer Jam'.
9/10
5/5

ObsidianSnow responds:

Yeah, it really does need to be completed, you're right. When I get around to it... lol
glad you thought the effects were cool.

Thanks for the review, Supersteph.

[Memories 2 - F-777]

AMAZING!!!

I'm not usually into songs which are supposed to calm you down, but this really rocked. In my opinion, one of your best songs. The piano was outstanding, the accompaniment: wow, rythm: left me out of breath, percussion: extraordinary, everything else: Awesome. Only the ending was a little out of place, but the rest of the song could not be given less than a
10/10
5/5
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[Simple silince]

Awful

Probably this was a work of five minutes, eh? Probably. The name says it all, simple, silent, but you should've added 'boring' to it as well. No effort at all put in it, and utter nonsense. As a matter of fact, I think in the review score I gave you three more points than you were supposed to have. Try and put more effort in your upcoming songs, and maybe make them not so simple and silent.
3/10
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Mushrambo606 responds:

Im new to these programs. I have been working on it longer then you would think. And their is more to this music then you think aswell. Giving such a review isnt really helpfull seeing as im just new to these kind of programms.

Think before you talk plz, a comment like this is so lame.

[\\Cowcow'sCreation//]

WOW!

That really owned! Great job! You sure know how to compose piano music! Keep up the awesome work! Nice variety, rythm, melody, looping, everything!
10/10
5/5
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[SSBB Main Theme(GaV)]

It's quite good

You chose a good song to remix lol. It sounded great, but you just used guitar and cymbals, plus the beginning was a little quiet, and even the song overall was a little quiet. If you used more instruments, and added an accompaniment, it'd be great!
8/10
4/5