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[Castle Crashing The Clay]

Not that good...

I'm nowhere when it comes to flash, but from what I read in reviews, the type of animation that you did is hard to make, so good job on that I guess.

Music was awesomely catchy, but didn't fit at all with this. I'd suggest a house song or at least something a little less action-like.

The surroundings don't have much to do with the subject. By looking at the current Castle Crashers flash, you can find out what kind of background to use.

The animation in all was way too short, and covered up in text to make it look long. The text wasn't that annoying, and kept me curious to see what's next, but if you wanted to make a flash out of text (which I doubt will pass judgement) then you could make a seperate flash movie. Plus, some of it was explaining what the movie consisted of where you could use the Author's comments instead.

Overall it's quite short, and the surroundings aren't that good, but the music was fine, although it wouldn't fit with the movie. Not a bad idea, but you should develop it more. Sorry that I didn't have much to say, I've no idea when it comes to flash like this...
4/10
2/5

-Review Request Club-

[--Nightmare--]

Really good!

Storyline was very well done and original, plus the music that went with it gave it an awesome feel and they're right at home in this flash. The silent on wasn't too silent and the one that plays when the monster appears wasn't too action packed, which was great ^^.

Some of the drawings were very well done but some weren't so good. Backgrounds are a little poor and the first part where the houses are wasn't bad but some more attention to detail (windows, bushes, cracks in some walls, etc) would've made it look a lot better. The characters, on the other hand, were perfectly drawn, especially the close ups (I rather liked the close up of the monster).

Animation was smooth in most parts, but in some parts it didn't look right, for example, when the mutant from his nightmare teleported away from the bullet from his gun and next to Mr. Johnson. Your attention to detail when it came to animation was impressive, (the drink splashing when he put it on the table, blood trickling out of the monster's mouth) and really made it look like an aweome horror movie.

Overall, a really good horror movie. Detail in the drawings and a little smoother animation would be great, but everything else was fantastic. Keep up the good work!
9/10
5/5

-Review Request Club-

[A Men's Room Monologue]

You captured the very essence of public bathrooms!

Lol, this was very funny, and very true. The animation and the graphics are a little rusty, but the voices are clear, and it's quite a long movie as well, remembering that the subject is hard to talk about. A really awesome movie, keep up the good work! :)
10/10
5/5

[Animator vs. Animation II]

Wow, you really must've worked hard on this...

Really awesome movie. You really know how to use flash. The animation was very smooth, and the fight was extremely varied. I liked how different things happened at the same time to create utter chaos, for example the part of the conversation with programmer021 when the fight was going on as well. I had to watch that three times till I really got what was happening. The ending was pretty cool too. You really don't get tired watching a movie like this. I watched some similar movies to this like Icon Wars but this beats them all. A really funny, chaotic and awesome movie. Very original concept, and it definitely beats Animation Vs Animator 1 (which rocked as well, btw =] ). Wish you'd make a three. Keep up the awesome work ^^.
10/10
5/5
Fav'd!

[T E T R I S ' D]

Original and awesome. Good job!

It looks like you put a lot of effort in it. I really liked the synchronisation with the music and the animation itself. Good choice of song too. The stickman itself needed a little adjusting. He moves more like a liquid and looked slightly like one too, but apart from that, the moves he did were fantastic, varied, and really awesome. The concept is very original, and you did a really good job making it. The story itself was pretty good too, I wish it was longer. You should also make that robot a little more menacing. Some physics in the game were set out wrongly, for example when the stickman falls off from the top of the tower, he accelerated way too fast, and I think one of the moves he did whilst he was climbing the tower dodging the tetris blocks wasn't performed right, but these defects are really small. Apart from those problems, this movie is amazing. I couldn't stop replaying it, and every time left me amazed. Man, I wish a game would be made out of this. Amazing job overall, I really enjoyed it.
10/10
5/5
Fav'd!

["A Slice of the Action"]

Great lol!

Good job. It was quite funny. You should've made more clips and short stories of the same subject, but different stories. Like next, he finds a jetpack...
To be continued lol.
10/10
5/5

[Liam Lynch - Whatever]

Wow, that really was good

After all the times he kept saying whatever, each time it made me laugh. Great job.
10/10
5/5
Whatever.

[Pickle Curiosity]

Wow

Lol great job! I wished the voices would beheard a little more though. Awesome movie anyway.
10/10
5/5

[Metal Gear Crisis 1.2]

The funniest movie I've seen since MGC 1

Man this movie was awesome...or was it?
Yes, it was.

[Best present ever]

Meh...

The animations were very good, and the plot was OK, but it wasn't really anything special. Maybe if you make the sinister person more sinister, and the main character less...childish, and maybe add a few jokes or something, then it'd be great.
Good job anyway ;)