Not that good...
I'm nowhere when it comes to flash, but from what I read in reviews, the type of animation that you did is hard to make, so good job on that I guess.
Music was awesomely catchy, but didn't fit at all with this. I'd suggest a house song or at least something a little less action-like.
The surroundings don't have much to do with the subject. By looking at the current Castle Crashers flash, you can find out what kind of background to use.
The animation in all was way too short, and covered up in text to make it look long. The text wasn't that annoying, and kept me curious to see what's next, but if you wanted to make a flash out of text (which I doubt will pass judgement) then you could make a seperate flash movie. Plus, some of it was explaining what the movie consisted of where you could use the Author's comments instead.
Overall it's quite short, and the surroundings aren't that good, but the music was fine, although it wouldn't fit with the movie. Not a bad idea, but you should develop it more. Sorry that I didn't have much to say, I've no idea when it comes to flash like this...
4/10
2/5
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