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[Wind-Tanken face]

Hmm...

As they said in the reviews below me, it's too abstract. You can barely make out much.

The colour scheme in this is nice to look at, and I can't complain there. The sky-like colours at the very top look very good, and the other bright colours looked fine together. Also, it looks cool as an oil painting.

As for the picture itself, I wouldn't really see it as a face. I can't seem to find the nose (unless it's the purple thing at the very left or the yellow thing, -.-) and I don't see what you mean by slowly disappearing from up to down. It sounds like an original idea, but I can't really see it in this picture.

In all, the colours are great, but the message of the picture isn't given out much, since I can't really see anything which has to do with a face (that could be my fault though). Using the same colours, if you remake it to look a little more obvious, I'm sure it'll come out better.
7/10

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

I know. Thanks!

[The Beast:Final Cut]

Best art I've ever seen!

Wow, this looks amazing. I can't believe you managed to pull off a beast as ugly (I'm saying that in a good way) and as menacing as this.

The beast itself looked amazing, and very unique. Your choice of colours are out of this world, and the texture is flawless. I especially liked the fur on the head and the texture of the arms.

My only complaint are the eyes. As they said in the other reviews, the colour is too bright, and in my opinion, they need to look more menacing and evil. They're too small and circular. Make them bigger, more oval shaped, and give them something unique and terrifying which makes the viewer try to look away from those eyes...................................... Argh... I'm terrible at explaining.

The background looks very mystical, chaotic and fits perfectly with the beast. It had a lot of variety into it an made the viewer wonder what there really is in that background. Terrific job on it.

You have just created an amazing masterpiece. I don't know how you managed to achieve such a menacing picture, but you did a great job on it, so keep it up!
10/10
5/5
Fav'd.

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[aging up]

A work of 10 minutes

This really isn't done very well. It looks like you did this in 10 minutes or less.

It looks too rough and needs more work in it. Shading in this isn't that special, and they all look pretty strange. The first one looks too much like a used, 2 coloured rubber, and I agree with FlashtooREV, when saying that the last one looks like a squid. He doesn't have any wrinkles either. The face shapes all look quite strange. You should've taken a shape which looks like a head, and used that shape for the drawings, as Fro said.

Still, it is quite a good idea, which I haven't seen yet in the Art Portal. A good start, but too rough and needs work.
3/10

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piggy123 responds:

i wanted the heads to look like that

[Shark]

Wow!

This is a really good picture! Needs some detail, but definitely realistic.

The shark looked very realistic. I just think the face looked kinda strange, and it was a little too small in all. You should make it a little longer. Plus, the gills look too big and stand out too much. Apart from those, it looks almost like an actual picture of a shark.

The colour scheme is godly. Perfect colours for th sharks, and the sea in the background, although by blurring the colours together a little more, it may look better. Also, the sand, although it does have a good colour, is too blurred in with the sea.

It was a good idea to do a shoal of fish in the background, but as they said in the other reviews, it needs more. Some things which take the attention away from the shark a little, like a casket, a distant silhouette of another shark, more fish, seaweed, rocks, a cave, starfish, and maybe something artificially made, like a submarine. Just don't make them stand out too much, or the shark loses its importance and you'll have to rename it 'Under the Sea' or something.

In conclusion, a very realistic picture, which just needs some more detail and working on the shark a little. The colour scheme is great, and overall the picture looks excellent. Keep it up!
9/10

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SeaBoundRhino responds:

Thanks :D

I like what you say about the colour scheme. I see that the main problem to my drawings is just adding small details. I knew I should have added more to the background, but anything on the sea bed looked bad. But I think that is because of what you said about the sand being blurred too much.

Very good review.

[Modern Day Man]

Nothing too special...

I didn't really like it much. It's a little boring to look at, and it needs more detail.

He didn't look so muscley and looked pretty strange. His fingers (especially the one on his right hand) look disfigured, and his arms and legs look too short or too thin.

The background, as Haggard said, was too simple. What you could do is make a background of what a modern day man would really be in (Internet Cafe, computer, Burger King :P, etc.), or if you don't want a background, at least make it more interesting, with a gradient or something.

Another thing which is strange is that there are some lines on him which don't look right (the V under his neck and the = sign around his elbow). They look a little strange.

Well, the message that this gives out is good, but I think it should be portrayed a little more. The shading was OK, though, and the colour scheme wasn't bad.
6/10

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[Black gold sculptue]

Yep, much better in full size!

It looks quite cool, and detailed. I like it.

The texture in the black sculpture was amazing, and the picture was quite cleverly drawn. I looks like loads of things but I couldn't make up my twisted mind to what I really think it is.

The background, in my opinion, didn't impress me much. The orange didn't look that well with the black and didn't look that realistic. Try and make it look more real by adding chips of the stone, and cracks, and change the colour to something that looks better with black. I don't know if this'll come out good, I don't know how to review art.

Also, as the other reviews pointed out, it doesn't look that good when it's not centered. It's too much to the left.

Anyway, sorry for the useless review. Good job on it in all :).
9/10
5/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thanks for this. It was a good review indeed!

[Tricky the clown]

Needs colour...

Wow, this really looks like an awesome sketch. If only it had some colour.

The texture on Tricky's face is out of this world. It's in so much detail, and so were the hands. The hair looked too simple and didn't have much detail which kinda contrasted too much with the detailed hands and face. Also, a background might look cool.

Hank does look a little strange, as Haggard mentioned. I wouldn't have recognized him if I hadn't known about the madness series. Maybe by adding colour he can be more distinguishable.

In all, a very detailed sketch which really looks cool. Just work on the colour, and on Hank, and you'd get a 10 from me.
9/10
5/5

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[Velvet Sculpture]

Whoa...

This looks just like someone took a picture of a sculpture. It's that amazing!

The shading and designs were perfect, and looked exactly like a proper sculpture. I especially liked the designs around the middle.

As for the colour, the one you chose was very good, but some more colours would fit if you're aiming for a mystical and magical type, for example, a faint red light coming out of the crevice that makes the circle.

Still, It's really amazing. I feel as if I could reach out and touch it on my computer monitor and feel the texture of the rock, lol. Keep up the great work!!!
10/10
5/5

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HeavyTank responds:

Aah, thanks a lot!

[The Sole Owner of Wings]

Now that looks cool!

Lol, this has Newgrounds's colour scheme :P. Looks really awesome! I can't believe you're not scouted yet :S.

The shading in this is just amazing. I especialy liked the shading at the tip of its tail and the tip of its wing. I think the shading on his chest was a little too bright though...

The head, as the other reviews said, is a little strange. The mouth was too big, and the nose was a little crooked. Still, the texture in this picture was very good.

Well, all in all, really awesome picture, and has such little flaws, that I couldn't help but give
10/10
5/5

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KrevZabijak responds:

The nose is supposed to be crooked. It's part gryphon/griffin. I do agree, the body is insanely bright but this was indeed a contrast study. I needed nearly pure white, and almost pure black.

Thanks a ton for the review!

[The never-ending secret]

Hm...

Another 7 :3. Anyway, onto the art...

I'll start with the grass. Needs some more resolution, but looks pretty cool. I noticed a few parts in the grass copied and pasted, which ruins it a little...

The background was pretty cool, but needs more glowing lights to it, especially at the sides, and maybe some sort of shape which the one who's looking at your art might be able to make out, because it looks a little random.

Doesn't look too bad, but just like your other submissions, needs some more detail. Still, keep up the good work ;).
7/10
4/5

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TiberiumCrystalKutu responds:

Thank you for this. I understand your way of thinking:D