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[PPC2 - Forest II]

Nice :D

Although, as mentioned in the other reviews, the first one beats this one by a little, this still is great.

The melodies were what I enjoyed most in this song for sure, and although some of them sound rather familiar, they're really catchy, and sound laid-back and fun to listen to. Really nice guitar playing too. As Darklight said, it's impressive that you managed to keep such a stable rythm when playing on your own without any drums or other instruments helping out. Speaking of other instruments, I wish there were a few more, since this does feel slightly empty. Sadly, like in the other song, this doesn't have such a good recording quality either, which honestly ruins this song quite a bit.

The transitions sound great, and I can't complain about them. Amazing song structure too, like in the last one, with a lot of variety too, and many alternate melodies which all sound really cool. The song has a nice intro too, with a very catchy melody, and the ending was really good. Ended on the right note, with a nice ritenuto to it.

This really does need some drum beats to them. I'm imagining a soft snare and ride cymbals over here, or maybe some congas and bongoes could sound good, along with a few forest sound effects; you really should get SessileNomad to make some drums for you :D.

This is a really nice song in all; another one which makes me have a picture of a dense forest in my mind. Sorry for the short review (OK... short compare to my other reviews...). Anyway, keep it up!
8/10
4/5

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Monkeydelic responds:

Thanks :)

I'll try to add some synth and other stuff on the re-record.

As far as i know SessileNomad is working on a drum track now, so i'm really looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

Thanks for review :)

Namaste.

[Industrial Cavern]

I see why it's one of your best songs.

This is a perfect song for what you were aiming for, and sounds great.

The melodies sound really awesome and fit very well with the song, and although there's only one real melody playing over here, this didn't get too repetitive. Loved the instruments over here, they sound very industrial, especially the one playing the background melody which sounds trumpet-ish and the bells were excellent too, and gave a mystical feel to the already awesome mechanical feel of the song.

The transitions here are excellent, but what made them so good were the loads of tempo-changes you did here. They fit a lot with the factory suddenly starting up/shutting down. I liked the transition at around 2 minutes into the song, as the other reviewers said, it seemed like the song stopped, but luckily it didn't. The structure is amazing too, and the variety is great, just getting a little repetitive sometimes. Extraordinary buildups too. I really liked the intro with that effect, and the main drum beat started up really well and I quickly caught its rythm. I see what you were going for in the ending, and you did a good job on it, it sounds a lot like the factory's stopping. I still think you should've continued the bells' melody some more though, and then you end it with a proper ending note, or you could try and loop it, because as you said, it could be in a game after all.

There weren't any drums over here, and they're definitely not needed. All of the amazing factory sound effects served as great percussion, and had a catchy beat to them, even for just sound effects. I liked the sound effect you used at the beginning, too. What I'm just hoping for is more variety of effects, and different beats, because, by making more beats with more effects, you'd have fixed the 'a bit repetitive' problem that Haggard mentioned. Still, the repetitiveness of the effects isn't really such a big problem when they have such an amazing and catchy beat to them.

Honestly, Industrial never sounded so good. This'll make a great soundtrack in a game, and my only complaints are the repetitiveness of the beat and the ending needing to be a bit longer and more gradual. Other than that, great job, and definitely keep it up!
10/10
5/5
Sorry, no download. Industrial isn't my genre :P.

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PuffballsUnited responds:

Whoa! Thanks for the intense review! I know what you mean by thew beats getting repetitive and I'll keep that in mind for next time.

[byzentine awesome.]

Not too good...

Not such a great job. It has some potential, but definitely needs more work to it.

The melody sounds very Arabic and cool, but there was only one melody practically, which was pretty annoying. The instruments weren't that good either, TBH, since that sax doesn't sound much like a sax, plus the piano isn't really best of quality. If you want an Arabic style, try and add some acoustic guitars or something, and making the sax and piano sound better.

The transitions were pretty strange in general as well, for example, the drum roll came in very suddenly and unexpectedly, plus the drums were taken away quite abruptly too. Not such a great song structure in all, and this was very repetitive too, with the same melody being played quite a few times, and a rather annoying drum beat in the background. The intro wasn't really that good. I don't see why you want to start it with claps (or was that rain? O_o). The ending was sudden as well, since I expected the sax to go on longer, instead of just end. Plus, the final note needs some sort of importance, since it was just like all the other notes, and didn't sound much like an ending note.

The drums were annoying and sort of felt extra in the song. The snare used wasn't bad, but apart from that, the drum samples weren't too special. Also, the drums varied from too loud at the beginning and too soft after the long snare roll was over.

The melody here is nice, but the song needs more fullness to it, with more instruments accompanying in the background, a better song structure, better percussion and more variety. Sorry for the harsh review :(.
4/10
2/5

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mikkim responds:

first off, there's no piano in here, and the saxaphone isn't supossed to sound like a saxaphone. the drums are kindof simplistic, yes, but that's one of the places that I don't really pay attention to.

[SN |Pristine| SN]

Glitch again X(

Quite an awesome song, and although glitch never really was my favourite genre and I never actually enjoyed glitch, songs like these are just the few exceptions.

The melodies were a little blurry together, but overall were quite nice. I liked the part at 0:58 quite a lot. The intruments were quiet awesome as well, although a bigger variety would be a little nicer, since in some parts, the high-pitched got kind of annoying, so you could make a lower instrument playing long ambientish notes. Effects here, were, as usual, extraordinary, especially the ones at 0:58.

The transitions were fine, and nothing felt too sudden or anything, except when the drums were introduced. You had a nice buildup before, but the drums still came in quite abruptly because of the fact that they're so fast-paced and loud, an the buildup was soft. The structure is OK, and the variety is great, if not just slightly a little random. What really put your score up were the tempo changes around the song and the accelerandos, ritardandos and stuff. It shows you worked quite hard on them, and they sounded really good in the song.

The intro was very good, and so was the accelerando after. Good buildup, but as I said, didn't introduce the drums that well, so you could make the buildup louder in general. The ending had ended on a good note, and was in general fine, but the last chord needs more importance, so you could make it louder and add more notes to the chord, along with some reverbed kick or faded sweep to show it's an ending.

The drums were fast paced, and even though ambient is supposed to be slow, you have yet again managed to mix DnB with ambient. The drums were very varied too, and although I think they could be a little quieter, they weren't bad overall. Good samples too.

So... Ambient/DnB/Glitch, you really do make the strangest combinations. Still, I guess that doesn't matter when these combinations always sound so good. Keep up the great work!
9/10
5/5

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SessileNomad responds:

and ambient bass pad would have made a bit of sense, but you see i actually was making this to be just an ambient song with really heabvy glitch stuff going on, but it kind of leaned mroe towards a dnb kinda track and i never really though about putting a bass pad in there, odd, since it is a dnb track

a reeverbed kick or somthing on the final note would have been a really good idea, i think i might do that on my next track, i cant believe i didnt think that xD

at :58, thats just a plain old phaser, in case you wanted to know

as for the blury-ness of the melodies, i actually had a pad doing the same notes as the piano in some parts, and for some reason it like ate up the piano, but i liked the emersive effect i felt it gave so i decided to not try and fix it

long reviews are my favorite :]

peace out, glad you liked it dude

thx for reviewing

[PPC2 - Forest I]

I definitely imagine a forest when hearing this...

An amazing start to what I'm sure will be a great trilogy. I enjoyed it quite a lot.

The melodies are light-hearted and catchy in the first half of the song, and at 3:14, when the choir ambience comes in, it was really cool. It sort of felt like the first part of the song is people going for a walk in the forest, enjoying themselves, and then they suddenly find themselves lost in the depths of the forest, and find out that it's no ordinary forest at all... Lol, cheesy as hell XD.

Anyway, the instrument choice here was really excellent, and in all the instruments felt really good together. I liked that guitar pluck-ish sound you first used at 0:13. Sadly, the quality here is off, and it really ruined this awesome song quite a bit. Some forest sound effects would do wonders over here, and although I think I did notice a few effects already, you should add more like the wind on the trees and bushes, crickets, more birds chirping, and maybe some things which leave the listener wondering about them, like sounds of footsteps.

The transitions were excellently done, with instruments being introduced so well. I was looking for a few more buildups here and there, but other than that, the structure is very good too, with amazing variety around, without making it sound random. I just didn't like the transition you did at around 3:14, to change from the main melody to the slower ambient one. It was sort of abrupt. What I would do is keep the main melody going instead of stopping it, and then slowly fading it as the ambient voices come in, instead of giving it such a sudden change.

The intro was OK, but those clicks felt a little strange. Still, I liked how the instruments all came in, they didn't feel sudden yet so many instruments came in at the same time. The ending wasn't that good, though, since it's just an abrupt fade. I think you should keep the fade, since it sort of pictures that the forest stretches on very far, and doesn't just end, but I think you shouldn't make it that abrupt, or, rather, make it seem more obvious that it's a fade, like at the end you could repeat the chorus that you played at the beginning but just a little louder and then you can start a long fade of about 10 seconds or so.

There weren't really any drums, and I agree with Darklight, you should add some drum beat with some reverbed timpanis, bass drums and some gongs or something in a few parts of the song, or you can add forest sound effects here and there as I mentioned above, since as the song is now, it just feels slightly empty, and you should remember that a forest is far from empty...

This is really fun to listen to, and portrays a lot of imagery of forests and stuff in my mind. It's got catchy melodies, excellent instrument choice, not a bad intro, good transitions, structure and variety, but I think the main problem here is the quality. Darn, I wrote too much. D:
9/10
5/5

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Monkeydelic responds:

Thank you :)

I've been thinking about adding some more effects, especially forest sounds and wind sounds and so on.
I'll work on the last transition, as i myself always thought it sounded kinda weird, but by the time it came to record it, i had already ended it the way it does, so there was no way of fading smoothly into that part.
New mic is coming up :)
And about the drums, i totally agree that it would do good with some kinda drum track, but i don't know if i should use a program to create drums, or just record them using stuff around the house, i'll have to play around with that alittle bit.

Thanks for taking the time to write such a long review, it is greatly appreciated :)

Namaste.

[If A Dream Came True]

Why?

Why didn't you even get 1 top 5 from all of the about 80 of your submissions. I don't even see how 0-bombers have the heart to 0-bomb songs as amazing as these.

Melodies, as stated in the other reviews, are just beautiful, but I don't even know why I even say that in every review I leave on your songs. It should be obvious now, lol XD. The piano melody was very nice, and so was the flute melody. Instruments are just amazing, except the piano which needs a bit more fullness to it (like some reverb or maybe a less abrupt piano sample), and the piano, which had a bit too much of a pitch bend to it. Other than that, the instruments sound so great together. I absolutely loved 2:17 as well, it made a nice climax to the song, and felt just so epic. Brilliant strings too, and the choir voices were cool as well.

The transitions were made perfectly, as usual. Good job on the reverse cymbal, and the buildups were gradual, professionally done and out of this world. Extraordinary structure, with no chorus but no randomness or repetitiveness to it. I honestly can't make a song sound random without a chorus repeated every 16 or so bars, but you made the song sound so fun-to-hear, varied, and great. The intro was great too, and if I had to go through it, I wouldn't change a thing, but unfortunately, the ending didn't impress me much. Piano endings are quite hard to make without sounding like a sudden stop, so I think you should remove the quiet piano at the end and added a final long-ish note with the flute at the end.

Drums, like Darklight said, are slightly too quiet, and there was a kick which was reverbed quite a lot, and didn't fit much with the song. Other than that, from what I can hear, the drums are quite well varied, although nothing really too special.

I rarely give out less than 10/10 in your songs, and this is just another review with that score =.= . The only things which bothered me a little were mainly the drums and ending, because other than that, this song has no right to not be in the top 30. Even your old songs impress the heck out of me. It takes a lot of talent to write a song as amazing as this, and you're full of it. Keep up the amazing work, can't wait to hear more masterpieces from you.
10/10
5/5
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ErikMcClure responds:

Most of the problems you mentioned are simply because its an old song, but I don't want to change it for fear of ruining what I consider to be one of my best songs.

[ECHO - Reverb-X (2009)]

Nice :D

It's quite cool sounding, even though it has a few defects.

The melodies are definitely the best part of this song. Catchy enough to stay locked in my head and never get out, probably. I loved the piano solo at the end not to mention the part at 1:22, where the trumpet answered to the two notes before it. Speaking of the trumpet, let's move on to the instruments. Well, there's definitely a unique sounding batch of instruments around here (who knew a TRUMPET would fit in an electronic dance song?!). Still, unfortunately, the fact that they're all presets, or sound a LOT like them, makes your song sound very generic. If you're downloading something, make sure it doesn't sound like a preset or you'll get loads of people like me complaining about them. Still, I won't take the score down because of the preset use, since the melodies compliment them really well. Still, as SessileNomad said, the bassline was much too repetitive, so you could work on that ;).

The transitions were awesomely done, and the melodies flowed excellently together. I liked the drum roll you did to introduce the drums, so that they wouldn't come in too suddenly. The structure is great too, and the song, although had quite a few repetitions of the main melody, still didn't feel repetitive. Maybe it was the variety of instruments. Anyway, now for the intro. Definitely a good way to start the song, and the buildup after was excellent. The ending was really good too, even though piano endings never come out that excellently. Maybe you could give a big chord to the piano at the end along with that reverbed kick thingy to give it more of an ending.

The drums, although are catchy and nice, were presets as well. I didn't notice much editing you put into it. If you're going to edit a preset, make sure it doesn't sound anything like the original, if you don't want it to sound generic. If you really want to use Improvised Bongoes, then I suggest taking the bongoes playing at the end of the preset away, since they sound ugly. I think they're the Op 5 of the preset, just right click Op 5's knob under Output in the matrix to take it away. Well anyway, apart from the fact that they're a preset, they still fit very nicely with the song. I think they could be a little louder though, but that's nothing a little mastering can't fix.

Definitely a cool-sounding improvement to the original (sorry Scooter-16 :P), so good job. Practically, the only real problem is that the instruments are mostly presets so they sound too generic. Other than that, excellent job. Oh, and don't mind if I gave a 10 on Scooter's and a 9 on yours, I wasn't so harsh back then :P.
9/10
5/5
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Echo responds:

hehe You? Harsh? Nah... Who would honestly say that....(I would!) Shut up Conscience! :P

Yeah, i guess i did use some presets but since they were in the original i couldn't change them too much, copyright and all. About the Bongoes, i lowered the volume on the bongoes at the end. Didn't remove them completely though. Will do that in the revised ver...

Thanks for the review man! Cya
Darklight17

[Deep_Town_Blues [Box-Killa]]

Not bad :)

It's an OK jazz piece, but still has a few defects.

The melody in the background was great, especially the bass, and the guitar sounds quite nice even for improvised. I didn't even notice it was actually improvised until you said, but it still is a little random. The instruments are nice, especially the sax and the bass, along with the guitar, but I guess that's because it's real anyway. I think you should take away the reverse cymbal you used. I usually like hearing reverse cymbals in songs, but this is supposed to be jazz, and jazz performances aren't able to play a reverse cymbal as far as I know.

The transitions here are OK, and the guitar's melodies were all introduced quite well. Quite a good song structure, and great variety, if not just slightly a bit random. I just think the backing melody, as Darklight said, was too quiet and too repetitive, although awesome at the same time.

The intro was fine, but I think you should either remove the first repetition of the sax melody at the beginning where there's no drums or add 2 repetitions without drums at the beginning, since as it is now, the drums seem to come in at the wrong time. TBH, I really was hoping this wouldn't have a fade, since fade endings very rarely turn out good. I was thinking, maybe you could remove the fade entirely, play the very first note you played in this song with the sax one last time except a full bar long, and then give it some silence at the end. It should sound better than the ending.

The drums, like the backing melody, were very repetitive as well, and practically were the same thing throughout the whole song, while being too quiet as well. Still, the samples weren't bad. I think you should remove that snap though and maybe add a ride cymbal, since usually the cymbals in Jazz sound much more echoey and not so abrupt like that hi-hat you used there. The drums fit pretty well with the song though, especially with the backing track, apart from that problem which Sonofkirk mentioned regarding the bass which I didn't even understand a letter of it because I'm only Grade 3 Theory :(.

Anyway, overall not a bad little mixture of Jazz and Blues. Not a bad job in general ;).
7/10
4/5

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Box-Killa responds:

lol im at level 0 theory and i understand completely, i suppose ive just go a nack for it lol. Yes to everything you said lol, except the drums do come in at the right time lol, listen to it a couple times lol.

thanks to the review, i sorta just found a nice progression and didnt really extend upon that, i just wanted to improvise and record it lol, nothing that special. But thanks for the review :D if i ever get some good gear i will make another one :D

[[Assios] - Midnight]

Wow, this is great :D

You've got a great song going right now, but just some problems make me give you a 9 instead of a 10. Aren't I cruel X).

The melody is awesome, and very catchy. So was the bass. The instruments here, although a little bit on the generic side, are still quite awesome, and the string addition at a little more than half through the song was quite unexpected and was excellent. Dunno why, but fast paced strings always fit well with midnight-ish songs :S. I like the little effects you did here and there, like the reverse cymbal or sweep thing you did at the beginning. I don't think you should add applause in this song though, since you're supposed to be picturing yourself driving down a highway while it's midnight, and applause sort of took that picture away from you and gave you a picture of an audience watching a performance of this song instead. Maybe you could add a wind effect instead, picturing the wind soaring by?

The transitions here were great, and I noticed a lot of nice drum transitions, reverse cymbals and fade-in's. New instruments were introduced perfectly, and all the melodies fit excellently together. Song structure is great too, so my only real complaint here is that it was quite repetitive. I didn't really notice any alternate melodies, and the only thing which was a break from the original melody was the ambientish part towards the middle of the song. This needs an introduction to an alternate melody somewhere, and although the instruments are nice and varied, the amount of melodies need working on. Good job with the intro, it started the song up excellently, and the ending was good too, but you should add a lot more silence to the end, and maybe add a long ending note as well.

The drums here are quite original and really fun to listen to. I liked the kick you used here, although as Chromonaut said, it's too unfiltered. Other than that, I noticed some really awesome things in the drums, like that sound at 2:15. Was that a reverse kick or something? Whatever it was, it rocked. I liked the double snares too. There was a nice amount of awesome sounding samples too, and in general, the drum beats were really well varied without getting random. They were just the right loudness and fit excellently with the song. The drums here rock.

Well, it's an almost flawless song, but like all other songs, it has a few negatives. In all, I really enjoyed it, and if you work on the stuff I said above, this song will be perfect in my opinion. Overall, great job, and sorry for the long review, you've got to get used to that when being reviewing by me ;).
9/10
5/5
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Assios responds:

Whoa, that's really a kickass review you've got there, THANKS! :D

I totally agree with you, especially on the repetitiveness-part. When I listened to it after I had uploaded it, I thought it would be better if I had an alternate melody at 01:52. I was gonna do it (I even have the melody i was gonna put there in my head), but I just haven't done it yet. I'll definitely do it now tho', thanks! :)

I'll also make sure to test the song with other sfx's from 0:17-0:30, instead of the cheering sound.

And yes, the sound at 2:15 is a reversed kick.

Thanks again for an awesome review!! :)

[Cast From the Stars (Chill MX)]

Nice :D.

Really good job, I enjoyed it a lot. Still, you keep some of the mistakes you did from the old Cast from the Stars.

Some of the melodies are quite different to the original, and sound really good, especially the piano parts. I just think that, as Bluepulse said, it's missing something. You should add some more effects and reverb on some of the instruments. Give it some more of a space-like feeling to it. Still, the instruments are all great, especially that instrument playing along with the piano at the beginning.

The transitions are great, especially using the reverse cymbal thing to transit from one melody to another. Awesome structure too, and although this song is very long, it's not repetitive at all, and I understand how hard it is to do that. Nice intro too, but the ending is practically the same as the other one. It's a good ending, but definitely needs more silence after, like, say, 3 seconds at the least. Then, you could add a delay to the last note, or maybe you can do a quick fade the instrument that plays with the piano at the beginning. It feels too sudden as it is now.

The drums are awesome, and exellently varied, with one of the best drums samples I've heard in a while. A little simple at times, but in all they're really good percussion that fit nicely with the song.

Well, I can't say it's better than the original, and I can't say that it's worse. This one's slower and more laid back, while the other is faster and action-packed. It depends what you prefer. Still, you executed both of them very well, so great job :D.
9/10
5/5 - Zerobombers FTW :D!!... not.

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Bracksta responds:

wow thanks for the great review! right now i am doing a collab with gravy and he is mastering it also so i will see what he does and practice my EQ skills and lil thinks like you said. AND THANK YOU FOR OFFSETTING THE BOMBERS, lol. peace bro